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The 10-Page Script Audit
10 pages.
60 minutes.
A clear diagnosis & a step-by-step rewrite plan.
Notes from an award-winning TV writer who’s been in the rooms, on the sets, and in the cut.
START THE 10-PAGE AUDIT
How It Works
1. Book the audit
2. Upload your first 10 pages (PDF)
3. Get a clear diagnosis + rewrite plan on a 60-minute Zoom
$347
You’ll get scheduling + submission steps immediately after purchase.
This Is For You If:
- You can feel something’s off, but you can’t diagnose it anymore.
- You’re getting vague notes like “raise the stakes” with no clue how.
- Your opening doesn’t feel inevitable yet. It feels… accidental.
- The project has been sitting because you don’t know what move to make first.
- You want industry-level clarity without paying for a full script consult.
If you’re stuck, this gets you unstuck fast.
What We'll Cover
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Clarity: Do we instantly know what story we’re in and why it matters?
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Protagonist: Is your hero active and driving scenes instead of reacting to them?
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Stakes + momentum: Do the pages build pressure, urgency, and forward pull?
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Opening structure: Is the setup purposeful or are we watching you warm up?
We’re not going for perfect. We’re going for progress.
About Dawn
Dawn DeKeyser is a TV and film writer and producer with decades in writers’ rooms, on sets, and in pitch meetings. She’s written and produced hundreds of hours of television across legacy, cable, and streaming.
Her credits include Ugly Betty, Samantha Who?, NewsRadio, Becker, Good Witch, and more. She’s worked with Emmy and Oscar-winning talent, and she’s taught screenwriting at UCLA, NYU, and film festivals nationwide.
She knows what gets a script read and what gets it tossed aside by page five.
What You’ll Walk Away With
- A clear diagnosis of what’s not working in your opening (and what is working)
- The top fixes, in order so you stop wasting time on cosmetic rewrites
- A practical rewrite plan with specific page moves you can execute immediately
You’ll know what draft to write next.
What This Is (And Isn’t)
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This is not a line-by-line polish.
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This is not a full script consult.
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This is a professional audit of the opening so the next draft actually improves.
Think of it as your rewrite marching orders
Testimonials
MICHAEL JAMIN
Emmy-nominated TV Writer, Showrunner, Author
KING OF THE HILL, JUST SHOOT ME, TACOMA FD, MARON
"Dawn is one of Hollywood’s most sought-after television writers. Her knowledge and experience make her an invaluable addition to any writers’ room. And all of us are fortunate to work with her."
MARTINA CHACONAS
Screenwriter, Executive Creative Director
THE ONE CLUB, THE BELDINGS, COMMUNICATION ARTS, NY FESTIVAL OF ADVERTISING AWARDS
"Dawn's not only creative, but she’s strategic and collaborative. Her leadership has led to breakthrough, award-winning work that substantially increased sales and built brands. She’s a natural mentor to creatives. Plus, she’s really fun to work with."
LIZ SAGAL
TV Writer on Emmy-winning Shows, Executive Producer
THE FLIGHT ATTENDANT, COWBOY BEBOP, LOST IN SPACE, MONK, CHARMED
"Dawn is the reason I became a television writer. She’s a fantastic mentor, collaborator, and peer. Her wicked humor and fearless approach to storytelling are inspiring. She makes any writer’s room a thousand times better!"
ROB COHEN
Emmy-winning TV Writer & Director
SOMEBODY SOMEWHERE, THE SIMPSONS, LADY DYNAMITE, THE BIG BANG THEORY
"I’ve worked with Dawn in the comedy trenches. She’s seen it all and done it all. Listen to her!"
DAVE CROSMAN
Screenwriter, Client
"When you work with Dawn, you instantly know why she’s a professional. Her notes are robust and deep, adding layers to your writing while preserving your voice. In a world of mediocre script services, going to a pro who has been there and mastered that is well worth your time and money."
CRISTINA MOSCINI
Author, Filmmaker, Actor
"Any writer is lucky to benefit from closeness to you. Thank you for your time and generosity. After just 3 days, I feel clearer on how to get ahead with what is to come."
Ready to fix your opening?
10 pages. One hour. Diagnosis + rewrite plan.
$347
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