The 10-Page Script Audit

10 pages.

60 minutes.

A clear diagnosis & a step-by-step rewrite plan.

Notes from an award-winning TV writer who’s been in the rooms, on the sets, and in the cut.

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How It Works

1. Book the audit

2. Upload your first 10 pages (PDF)

3. Get a clear diagnosis + rewrite plan on a 60-minute Zoom

4. Bonuses Include: Free Formatting Cheat Sheet and an Additional one-on-one session to review the formatting of your script to make sure it looks professional

$347

You’ll get scheduling + submission steps immediately after purchase.

This Is For You If:

You can feel something’s off, but you’ve lost the ability to diagnose it.
You keep getting notes like “raise the stakes” and nobody can tell you how.
Your first 10 pages feel competent… and somehow still not inevitable.
You’ve been rewriting scenes instead of fixing the engine.
The draft has been sitting because you don’t know what move to make first.
You want industry-level clarity without paying for a full script consult

If you’re stuck, this gets you unstuck fast.

What We'll Cover

Clarity: Do we instantly know what story we’re in and why it matters?
Protagonist: Is your hero active and driving scenes instead of reacting to them?
Stakes + momentum: Do the pages build pressure, urgency, and forward pull?
Opening structure: Is the setup purposeful or are we watching you warm up?

We’re not going for perfect. We’re going for progress.

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About Dawn

Dawn DeKeyser is a TV and film writer and producer with decades in writers’ rooms, on sets, and in pitch meetings. She’s written and produced hundreds of hours of television across legacy, cable, and streaming.

Her credits include Ugly Betty, Samantha Who?, NewsRadio, Becker, Good Witch, and more. She’s worked with Emmy and Oscar-winning talent, and she’s taught screenwriting at UCLA, NYU, and film festivals nationwide.

She knows what gets a script read and what gets it tossed aside by page five.

Testimonials

MICHAEL JAMIN

Emmy-nominated TV Showrunner, Author

"Dawn is one of Hollywood’s most sought-after television writers. Her knowledge and experience make her an invaluable addition to any writers’ room. And all of us are fortunate to work with her."

MARTINA CHACONAS

Screenwriter, Executive Creative Director

"Dawn's not only creative, she’s strategic and collaborative. Her leadership has led to breakthrough work that substantially increased sales and built brands. She’s a natural mentor to creatives.

LIZ SAGAL

TV Writer on Emmy-winning Shows, Executive Producer

"Dawn is the reason I became a television writer. She’s a fantastic mentor, collaborator, and peer. Her wicked humor and fearless approach to storytelling are inspiring. She makes any writer’s room a thousand times better!"

ROB COHEN

Emmy-winning TV Writer & Director

"I’ve worked with Dawn in the comedy trenches. She’s seen it all and done it all. Listen to her!"

DAVE CROSMAN 

Screenwriter, Client

"When you work with Dawn, you instantly know why she’s a professional. Her notes are robust and deep, adding layers to your writing while preserving your voice.

CRISTINA MOSCINI

Author, Filmmaker, Actor

"Any writer is lucky to benefit from closeness to you. Thank you for your time and generosity. After just 3 days, I feel clearer on how to get ahead with what is to come."