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 The 21-Day Intensive
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AFTER THIS THREE-WEEK SPRINT, YOU'LL HAVE A PROFESSIONAL DRAFT WORTHY OF CONSIDERATION
This is for you if...
- You’ve a complete pilot or feature draft -Â
 - You know it needs work, but you can’t see what to tackle first -Â
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 - You’re ready to execute a rewrite with focus and speed -Â
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 - You want professional-level clarity, not a pile of opinions -Â
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Fill out the Application Form and upload your pages.Â
If it’s a fit, you’ll receive an acceptance email.
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Once purchased, you’ll receive a checkout link and access to my calendar.
Payment plans are available.
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We meet 3 times in 21 days. You'll get notes, recordings, and the Rewrite blueprint.
Session Breakdown
Session 1: Diagnosis + your Rewrite Blueprint
We identify what’s not working, what matters most, and what to ignore. You leave with a clear rewrite plan and your priorities locked.
Session 2: Midpoint rewrite check
You bring pages and questions. We adjust the Blueprint as needed, solve the sticky story problems, and keep the rewrite moving.
Session 3: Final pass + polish
We tighten, fix the last soft spots, and bring the draft up to a professional finish.Â
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 Dawn DeKeyser is a TV and film writer and producer with decades in writers’ rooms, on sets, and in pitch meetings. She’s written and produced hundreds of hours of television across legacy, cable, and streaming.
Her credits include Ugly Betty, Samantha Who?, NewsRadio, Becker, Good Witch, and more. She’s worked with Emmy and Oscar-winning talent, and she’s taught screenwriting at UCLA, NYU, and film festivals nationwide.
She knows what gets a script read and what gets it tossed aside by page five.
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Testimonials
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MICHAEL JAMIN
Emmy-nominated TV Writer, Showrunner, Author
"Dawn is one of Hollywood’s most sought-after television writers. Her knowledge and experience make her an invaluable addition to any writers’ room. And all of us are fortunate to work with her."
MARTINA CHACONAS
Screenwriter, Executive Creative Director
"Dawn's not only creative, but she’s strategic and collaborative. Her leadership has led to breakthrough, award-winning work that substantially increased sales and built brands. She’s a natural mentor to creatives. Plus, she’s really fun to work with."
LIZ SAGAL
TV Writer, Executive Producer, Badass
"Dawn is the reason I became a television writer. She’s a fantastic mentor, collaborator, and peer. Her wicked humor and fearless approach to storytelling are inspiring. She makes any writer’s room a thousand times better!"
ROB COHEN
Emmy-winning TV Writer & Director
"I’ve worked with Dawn in the comedy trenches. She’s seen it all and done it all. Listen to her!"
DAVE CROSMAN

Screenwriter, Client
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"When you work with Dawn, you instantly know why she’s a professional. Her notes are robust and deep, adding layers to your writing while preserving your voice. In a world of mediocre script services, going to a pro who has been there and mastered that is well worth your time and money."
CRISTINA MOSCINI
Author, Filmmaker, Actor
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"Any writer is lucky to benefit from closeness to you. Thank you for your time and generosity. After just 3 days, I feel clearer on how to get ahead with what is to come."Â
Investment
$2,799Â
 Courses teach. Notes point out specific problems. Writers’ groups motivate.
None of them reliably produces the outcome you need: a draft that holds up when the Hollywood readers hit page one.
Payment plans are available at checkout.
Limited Spots
4 Screenwriters Accepted Each Month.Â
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