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Who Should Attend
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You’re a screenwriter breaking in (or breaking back in)
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You’re tired of translating vague notes
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You know something’s off, but can’t quite diagnose it
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You’ve rewritten the same pages too many times
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You want a professional approach without paying for a full script consult
What You'll Learn
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Spot the red flags that hold the pages back
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Fix a passive protagonist without rewriting the whole script
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Add stakes that land on the page
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Tighten structure into a cause-and-effect engine
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Diagnose whether your opening is story or just scenes
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Use my 10-minute repairs when you’re stuck and don’t know what to do next
What We’ll Cover
// WHAT THOSE PAGES MUST ACCOMPLISH IMMEDIATELY
// The reader’s decision-making process
// The 4 most common failures:
- Passive protagonist
- Soft story structure
- Unclear stakes
- Dialogue doing the heavy lifting
// Live example breakdowns
// A “what to fix first” map so you stop thrashing
// Q&A - Dawn wants to hear what's on your mind
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Dawn DeKeyser
// 30+ years writing for film and TV
// Hundreds of primetime episodes
// Thousands of hours in rooms and rewrites
// Credits seen by millions
// Worked with award-winning writers, directors, producers and actors
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