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Get your script into the best goddamn shape of its life. 

 

Script consulting and coaching for writers who want to know what’s working, what's not and how to fix it.
 
 
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Fix Your First 10 Pages

FOR SCREENWRITERS AND AUTHORS

 

 
If the opening isn’t working, the script isn’t working.
 
Period.

 

Those first pages are the handshake. If they're weak, the meeting’s over. 
 
In the Script Audit, you’ll get a clear diagnosis and a rewrite plan: what to fix first, second, third.
 
$347 flat rate. no application.

 

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 your first 10 pages.
 
45 minutes.
 
A step-by-step rewrite plan.

 

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MICHAEL JAMIN

Emmy-nominated TV Writer, Showrunner, Author

KING OF THE HILL, JUST SHOOT ME, TACOMA FD, MARON

"Dawn is one of Hollywood’s most sought-after television writers. Her knowledge and experience make her an invaluable addition to any writers’ room. And all of us are fortunate to work with her."

MARTINA CHACONAS

Screenwriter, Executive Creative Director

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"Dawn's not only creative, but she’s strategic and collaborative. Her leadership has led to breakthrough, award-winning work that substantially increased sales and built brands. She’s a natural mentor to creatives. Plus, she’s really fun to work with."

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TV Writer, Executive Producer, Badass

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"Dawn is the reason I became a television writer. She’s a fantastic mentor, collaborator, and peer. Her wicked humor and fearless approach to storytelling are inspiring. She makes any writer’s room a thousand times better!"

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Emmy-winning TV Writer & Director

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"I’ve worked with Dawn in the comedy trenches. She’s seen it all and done it all. Listen to her!"

DAVE CROSMAN


Screenwriter, Client

 

"When you work with Dawn, you instantly know why she’s a professional. Her notes are robust and deep, adding layers to your writing while preserving your voice. In a world of mediocre script services, going to a pro who has been there and mastered that is well worth your time and money."

CRISTINA MOSCINI

Author, Filmmaker, Actor

 

"Any writer is lucky to benefit from closeness to you. Thank you for your time and generosity. After just 3 days, I feel clearer on how to get ahead with what is to come." 

Stop Procrastinating


Do you have a story that must be told but you keep not telling it? Let's fix that.


Take action. If you don’t, you will continue to procrastinate. You will stay small. You will allow mediocrity to wend its way You will dream big but they will remain only dreams. 
Leap, or wonder what would have happened how your life could have been better.
Do you have a manuscript in the drawer? Do you have a script idea gathering dust? Do you have a story that must be told but you keep not telling it? You’re not alone.

Masterclass

 

One mistake you’re making in pitch meetings? You’re trying to sell your script. You're there to enroll others in your vision to create a TV series, a film, or a book that needs to be made.

We’ll break down the top mistakes that tank most pitches and how to fix them before the executives look at their phones.

 

Free

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Strategy Session

 

What do you want, what's in the way, and what's next? In our 60-minute Zoom meeting, we’ll diagnose your biggest blocks and build a personalized 3-month Creative Action Plan (CAP) you can start this week.

 You'll get clear on your priorities, writing goals, submission targets, and key milestones.

$347

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Script Consulting

 

Consultations that will take your writing beyond “good job” and right into “fuck yeah.” Otherwise, you’re sending above-average work into the void. Work with someone who knows what executives, showrunners, and producers are actually looking for.

$500 and up

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I’m a TV and film writer with decades in writers’ rooms, on sets, in pitch meetings, casting sessions, early morning table reads and late-night rewrites.

I’ve written and produced hundreds of hours of television across legacy media, cable, and streaming. I’ve written on Emmy and Golden Globe-winning shows, worked with Oscar-winning writers, directors, and actors, elbowed my way to the table, acted out, spoke up, and kept moving forward. 

If you want guidance, you need someone who has lived to tell. I’m a survivor’s handbook for writers who want to do and be more.

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THE SCREENWRITER'S GUIDE TO GETTING UNSTUCK & FINISHING THE DAMN THING
 

A self-paced 50-page workbook that guides you through SIX ESSENTIAL QUESTIONS to get your story up and running, and back on the road. And to draw out this metaphor to a painful degree, it’ll help you cross the finish line.

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